Friday, June 7, 2013

Error Analysis




Repair grammar and punctuation errors in the sentences



Exercise 1




1. The little girl spoke so quiet that I could hardly hear
her.


             A                           B                   C                       D


The little girl spoke so quiet that I could
hardly hear her. (adjective – adverb form)


. . . so quietly that . .
.




2. Each driver should check the oil level in their car every
three months.


                           A          B                               C            D


Each driver should check the oil level in their car
every three months. (pronoun-antecedent agreement) 


S= dianggap tunggal


. . . in his or her
car . . .




3. I hated to ask Anita, whom is a very stingy person to
lend
me money.


           A                             B                      C                      D


I hated to ask Anita who is a very stingy person
to lend me money. (commas nonessential interrupter)                                          kikir


. . . Anita , who is a very stingy person , to . . .




4. She decided to quit her high-pressured job, she didn’t want
to develop heart trouble.


                 A                                                    
B                   C                             D     


 She decided to quit her high-pressured job, she didn’t want
to develop heart trouble


.(comma splice)
sambungan


. . . job ; she . . . / . . . job , for she. . . / . . . job . She
. . .


                                        

5. The flakes in this cereal tastes like sawdust.


             A       B                      C     D


The flakes in this cereal tastes like sawdust.
Serbuk gergaji (subject-verb agreement)


. . . flakes (in this cereal) taste.. .  S=jamak




6. Much of my boyhood
was devoted to getting into rock fights, crossing railway trestles,
and the hunt


                        A                         B                         C                                                                          
D


for rats in drainage tunnels.


Much of my boyhood was devoted to getting into
rock fights, crossing railway trestles, and the hunt for
rats                                   
  


                                      mencurahkan                                             


in drainage tunnels.(parallelism) . . . and hunting
for . . .




7. When Turning on the ignition, the car backfired.


                      A     B              C                       D      


When Turning on the ignition, the car
backfired. (dangling modifier) 


                            Pembakaran


When I turned on the ignition,
the car backfired.


Turning on the ignition, I made the car backfire.




8. I asked the
clerk if the store had Stevie Wonders latest CD.


           A                  B                 C                   D


I asked the clerk if the store had Stevie Wonders latest
CD. (apostrophe)


                                                              
Wonder’s




9. The decisions of the judge seems questionable.


                            A         
B        C             D


The decisions of the judge seems questionable. (subject-verb agreement) 
S = jamak


. . . decisions (of the judge) seem . . .




10. Earlier in the day, she took a taxi to the airport.
Knowing
that her time was limited.


           A                               B                                 C                                       D


Earlier in the day, she took a taxi to the airport.
Knowing
that her time was limited. (fragment)


Earlier in the day, she took a taxi to the airport, knowing .
. .




11. Anybody who wants more dessert should give their order
to the pastry chef.


                         A                B                                      C      D


Anybody who wants more dessert should give their
order to the pastry chef. (pro.-antecedent agreement) 


S= dianggap tunggal

. . . give his or her order . . .





12. You must observe all the rules of the game, even
if
you do not always agree with it.


              A            B                                                 
C                                                    
D


You must observe all the rules of the game, even if
you do not always agree with it. (pronoun
reference)


. . . with them. Them refers to : Rules of the game




13. Playing tag on the back lawn, I spotted first
the turtle


            A            B                                 C       D


Playing tag on the back lawn, I spotted first
the turtle. (misplaced modifier)


Playing tag on the back lawn, I
first . . .




14. Because he never fully realized how important a
college education could be.


            A              B                  C                                                  
D


Because he never fully realized how
important a college education could be.(fragment)


He never fully realized . . .


Because . . . . could be, he
enlisted in the army
.




15. Her and I have been good friends now for many
years.


                A           B                     C              D


Her and I have been good friends now
for many years. (pronoun case)


She and I . . .




16. Lola looks  more better
than Gina in a leather coat.


                  A         B                C                      D


Lola looks more better than Gina in a leather
coat. (comparative adjective)


. . . looks better
than . . .




17. When he asked for a raise. his boss fired him


           A             B                  C                      D


When he asked for a raise. his boss fired him. (comma needed – introductory clause)


. . . raise, his . . .




18. Ruth begins each day with warm-up exercises, a long
run, and taking a hot shower.


                    A           B                                    C                                             D


Ruth begins each day with warm-up exercises, a long
run, and taking a hot shower. (parallelism)


. . . and a hot shower.




19. When I only three years old, my father taught me to
play
baseball.


                     A                B                               C                D


When only three years old, my father taught me to play
baseball. (dangling modifier)


When I was only three . . .




20. Trying to get outside quickly, the poor dog caught it’s
tail in the door.


A                                B                               C       D


Trying to get outside quickly, the poor dog caught it’s
tail in the door. (apostrophe)


. . . its. .nya benda/binatang




21. I bought a beautiful blouse in a local store with long sleeves
and striped cuffs.


A                                             
B                                
C                   D


I bought a beautiful blouse in a local store
with long sleeves and striped cuffs. Kancing (misplaced
modifier)


In a local store, I bought a beautiful blouse with long sleeves and . . .




22. No one in the class is better at computer programming
than his.


A                                  B                              C                   D


No one in the class is better at computer programming
than his. (pronoun case)


. . . than he.




23. Luckily someone offered me a ride to class, Otherwise,
I would have been late.


              A          B                                    C                                D


Luckily someone offered me a ride to class,
Otherwise
, I would have been late.(comma splice)


. . .class; otherwise, . . . / . . . class.
Otherwise, . .




24. He started taking pictures in college, which led to commercial
photography after he graduated.


    
A                                                   
B                       C                                               
D


He started taking pictures in college, which led
to commercial photography after he graduated.


(pronoun reference)


. . .
in college. This
hobby
led .
. .


Exercise 2.



1. The weather was quite warm, so we walked lazily along the shady path
near an old cemetery in the countryside.









The = determiner


weather = noun


was = verb


quite = qualifier


warm = adjective


so = conjunction


we = pronoun


walked = verb


lazily = adverb


along = preposition


the = determiner


shady = adjective


path = noun


near = preposition


an = determiner


old = adjective


cemetery = noun kuburan


in = preposition


the = determiner


countryside = noun  













2. While Josephine was nonchalantly eating her huge
sandwich, we numbly watched a sly cat as it climbed almost
imperceptibly onto the ledge by the sofa and rather greedily eyed a poor little
mouse under the chair.









While = conjunction


Josephine = noun


was eating = verb


nonchalantly = adverb dgn acuh takacuh


her = pronoun (or determiner)


huge = adjective


sandwich = noun


we = pronoun


numbly = adverb secara mati rasa


watched = verb


a = determiner


sly = adjective  lihai/licik


cat = noun


as = conjunction


it = pronoun


climbed =


almost = qualifier


imperceptibly = adverb : tak terlihat


onto = preposition  ke


the = determiner  


ledge = noun: birahi


by = preposition


the = determiner:


sofa = noun


and = conjunction


rather = qualifier


greedily = adverb


eyed = verb


a = determiner


poor = adjective


little = adjective


mouse = noun


under = preposition


the = determiner


chair = noun














Sumber :
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